Chapter 7: Shit's about to hit the fan

I know I Know Stone me. I didn't post when I said I was but forgive me I'm human. I took so long because I just felt like it wasn't ready and I'm still not sure if it's ready but I don't want to work on it so much that it looses the it's climax. SO here it is. Go enjoy this chapter. BYE.

No Ones POV

*in the parking lot*

"YOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Safaree screamed while skipping around in the parking lot.

"You're crazy man!!" He said to nic in a joking manner. Mean while nicki was standing by the car holding on to the door knob with a straight face.

Safaree looked at her weird. 'Why does she seem upset it just went DOWN in that office. AND not

to mention she said we're going to finish it at home. Like this shit is really happening' he thought.

He shrugged off the idea of nic being sad. Maybe he just miss read her. He opened the car for her and she got in quicker than ever. Safaree took his time to walk back to the driver side and got in.

He started the car and drove off.

"Yooo." He said again smiling so hard.

"What was that all about back there?" He asked her in a perky tone. He was so excited, he was finally

getting closer to nicki on an intimate level & she's the one who Initiated it all. Nicki just stared out the

window with her hands in her lap.

She sucked her teeth

"What was that about huh? you wanna know what that was about?"

He scrunched up his face a took a quick glance at her then back on the road.

He didn't like the tone of her voice. She continued.

"That nurse was getting on my last nerve! That's what my ghat damn problem was!" She paused.

"First the bitch wanted to disrespect the relationship between me & the father of my child.

Then she wanted to make me feel like less of a woman about not being able to make a baby.

How DARE she threaten me like that." Safaree shook his head.

"She was rude but nic why'd you let her get to you. You don't think you're over reacting on her intentions."

Nicki side eyed him.

"What the fuck are you saying to me...." By her tone he knew he'd messed up.

"Oh nah....I mean she was mad rude you know I agree."

"EXACTLY! So I had to show her ass that I know damn well how to make love, and you can ask

ANY of my past boyfriends about that. TRUST."

Safaree felt slightly offended by her last comment, 'what is she trying to say? when we had sex she wasn't trying? she was faking this whole? hell nah! I know I put it down on her plenty of times. there's no way she could fake every time. no!' He clenched his teeth in anger.'

She spoke again.

"Oh and by the way, sorry for calling you 'babe' back there. I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable.

I just said that stuff to make her even more jealous.....but good acting though never knew you had acting skills like that."

Safaree was hurt.

"Yea, so all that "save your energy." & "finish when we get home." Was just role play right?"

He asked hoping that wasn't the case.

"Exactly! I knew you understood."

Safaree clenched his hands on the steering wheel. he was beyond hurt by her blunt statement. The rest of the car ride was silent. And safaree hadn't taken another look at her the whole ride back. Nicki was oblivious to her rude comment so she just sat there scrolling up and down her phone. After a while of thick silence. They'd finally reached home. He pulled up in the drive way and turned the car off. He took his keys out, stepped out the car and shut his door. Nicki patiently waited for him to come around to open her door like he always did but he didn’t he had already been half way up the front walk way of the house.

Nicki was confused.

"The hell is his problem?" she mumbled to herself. She got out, slammed her door hoping he'd hear her. Wearing her 6 inch heels she strut her way up the Walk way, with her louis Vuitton bag in hand and entered into the house. Once she got in and shut the door she didn’t see safaree.

"AREE!" she called out.

Safaree heard her but didn’t feel like talking to her so he didn’t reply. Nicki walked toward the living room and Continued to call out to him.

"AR-" she heard a noise from the kitchen and there he was.

"oh there you are!" He ignored her and continued fixing himself a sandwich.

"Thanks for leaving me in the car back there!" she stared him down wanting what his reason was for that.

Safaree reluctantly answered.

"Oh no problem, my pleasure." He answered nonchalantly. Flashing her a fake smile.

Nicki rolled her eyes.

"Look I don’t know what your problem is but quiet frankly I'm not in the mood for it. Especially not after that

Annoying shit that just happened earlier. Great doctor pick by the way." she said in a sarcastic tone.

He turned his back too her pretending to fix something else. He closed his eyes and took in a deep breath as to not react to what she just said. He was two seconds away from doing the right thru me Scene on her. But instead he ignored her insult, took his sandwich and sat on the couch to Watch some TV.

"ugh whatever!" Nic head to the pantry to find some snacks. She reached for the granola bars that

Were at the top of the shelf that she never could reach without help from Safaree. She glanced at Safaree Contemplating whether she should ask him to help her or not. She saw how pissed off he looked and said

"On second thought I'll just get them myself." she kicked off her heels, got up on her tippy toes reaching for the box.

"If I can….Ju….st...grab on to…..this...Ahh" nicki yelled as everything on that shelf collapsed on her causing her to fall on her knees. Safaree jumped up from the couch and ran to her. She looked at him like a little kid that had just been caught doing something bad. He grabbed her arm and helped her up.

"You could've just asked me to help you." he spoke to her in a gentle voice. Despite the way he felt at the moment.

"Sorry." she replied. She bent down picking up the things she dropped. He looked at her struggling to get everything up so he helped her. Nicki put all the things she drooped back on the shelf and safaree did the same.

"thanks." she said to him. He gave her a chin-up head nod as if he was saying hey to one of his boys. He left her alone and went back to the couch. She watched him go back into a mood.

"Oh, and by the way I know we went to one doctor today but I'd like to get um…"nicki got nervous, this topic still didn’t sit right with her. She wasn’t comfortable speaking freely about babies. He looked at her from a far.

"Get what?" he asked.

"Um…. Get another opinion…" It was silent. She looked up at him and he looked directly at her. He processed what she said he lost interest. He turned his head back to the TV and Continued to eat. Then without losing focus he replied dryly.

"Ask TT to take you. She should be back today anyways. Or ask candi." nick was hurt by his dry statement. He'd given up on her just like she hoped would never happen.

" But I uhh..I wa…wan...wanted yo...u.. To... Actually your right forget I asked you I'll just ask TT." she gave him a faint smile that he didn’t see because he was focused on the TV screen. She picked up her purse from the counter and walked upstairs to her room. Once she got there she quietly shut the door behind her and leaned against it. She sighed. She slid her back down the door and sat on the floor. She stared into space.

"Why meeeeee?" she wined

"Just why God?.....i'm not a bad person so why do bad things keep happening to me." Tears began to fall from her eyes.

"This whole thing is just really draining. I don't even know if I want to talk about this anymore." she closed her eyes trying to avoid a tear from falling, but her attempt was useless. She took in slow breaths. After a few seconds she slowly opened her wet eyes. She felt sleepy all of a sudden, but she didn’t have the energy to get up and go to her bed. So she laid down right t there on the floor and decided to use her purse as a pillow. She stared into space once again, eyes wide open. She blinked a couple of times, finally being able to dry her eyes. After a while each blink became slower and her eye lids became heavier. Before she knew it her she fell into a quiet slumber.

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4 Hours later.

Nicki's POV

*BUZZ BUZZ* * BUZZ BUZZ*

"Whatttttttt!" I moaned. I felt my head buzzing. I lifted my head and realized it was coming from the inside of my purse. I unzipped it , took my phone out and clicked answered without looking at who's calling.

"Helloo." I spoke with my eyes barely open.

"Hi baby how are you?" my eyes shot open when I heard who it was.

"I'm fine ma. How are you?"

"We'll you'd probably be just better than fine if you talked to your mother more often." I sighed. Knowing the long rant she's about to give me.

"I haven't heard from you in weeks onika. I get worried for you especailly in that bussiness you live in now! Where anything can happen and there's parties every where. Temptation is at an all time high I can imagine. You know the devil is working don't you?"

I rolled my eyes. I love my mom but she is so extra sometimes.

"Yes mom I know. But I'm staying focused I promise! You know me, nicki does what nicki wants to do. So I'm not influenced by anyone."

"Don’t you think I know nicki does what she wants? That was the main problem when you were young. You heard me but you never REALLY listened. Like that time you went out to get that stupid tattoo."

I hate when she brings back that memory. I was young and dumb. Like get over it already I didn’t do it to hurt you.

"OKAY! Mom you're story telling again."

"Sorry baby."

"It's fine. So with out me being rude... mom is there something you called for specifically?"

"Oh? So are you too busy for your mama now?"

"No ma it's not that it's just that I've got a lot of things on my mind right now that all."

" Doh hot yuh head."

"Yea I know. I'll try not to worry."

"So is there anything new or big that you really wanted to talk about?" She said a little too confident.

"Noooo…Why?" I asked suspicious

"Because I know my babies and I know there's something. I can hear it in the pit of your voice."

Oh my gosh, no seriously I'm convinced my mother has super powers. Like I knew before she could read my Emotions easily in person but over the phone too? Like damn. I really didn’t know what to reply. I don’t want To say no because I'm terrible when it comes to lying to me mother so I just stayed silent.

"alright….I know don’t want to tell me right now so when the time is right tell me…...and I hope that time is soon because I really would like to know what's brothering my precious daughter."

"You had to have that last part in there didn't you?"

"You know I did."

We laughed together. Man do I love the sound of my mother happiness. I started to reality and remembered all that is going on right now so I wanted to just get off the phone and deal with some shit once and for all.

"hey mom I have to go okay."

"okay honey. I'll talk to you later. God bless."

"Bye mommy." And with that I hung up."

When I was finished with my mother I remembered that I needed to make another call to someone. I scrolled through my contacts and when I found their name I clicked it and it dialed. I slowly rose the phone to my ear not sure if I wanted to hear what they had to say about this situation. The phone continued to ring and I waited for a while….but eventually it went to voice mail. So I deiced to leave a message.

"Hay Tee, I miss you.....I hope you miss me too…... *sigh*. When are you coming back because I can use some girl time right about now, I'm feeling kinda crappy. Well....call me back when you get this babe. Okay... Bye."

I hung up and dropped my phone back in my bag. It's just been rejection after rejection. I haven't gotten this much rejection since I first started to come up in the game. I just want one last opinion . Just to make sure. Plus, since TT didn't answer my call I'll just go drive to Walgreens around the corner a get a pregnancy test. Yeah….I'll just do that. I pushed my self up using all my arm strength. As I stood up and picked up my keys I realized I needed to start working out cause I could barely get up just now. Ugh working out. that's another issue I'll have to deal with later. I opened my door and came down the stairs. I peeped into the kitchen and living room and he was still there watching TV but this time he got comfortable and sat under a blanket. He's so annoyed…..I can tell. I just wish I knew what I did that would make him that way. I shook my head. I walked down the other hallway and entered the guest bathroom. I took a good look at myself. I look tired and depressed. I can feel pimples arising on my cheeks. I wanted to cry again but I won't let myself because if I do I won't leave the house today. I turned around put the toilet seat over down and laid my purse on top. When I tuned back around I reached for sink knob and turned on the water. Once it got warm I began to wash my face and rubbed all my make up off. When everything got wiped off, I turned off the sink and wiped my face dry with a towel that hung from the bar. I put it back and walked back out. I grabbed my dark hoodie out of the closet and put on my dark shades. Even though evening was clearly approaching I didn't want a soul to know who I was when I went into the store. I opened the front door and called out to safaree.

"I'm going to the Walgreens. I'll be back soon." And without waiting for a response I shut the door and left.

Safaree's POV

I swear sometimes I just want to strangle nicki and push her down a flight of stairs. I know that sounds violent but she pushes me to absolute edge sometimes. I don't know how much of this hot and cold shit I can take. She played with my emotions today in that office and then pulled the rug from under me. Just using me as a pawn in her life games. I love that woman, I really do and lord knows I'd do anything for her but she's so fuckin' selfish at times. I know all this rejection must hurt but she acts like her feelings are the only ones that matter. And I'm tired of everything being about her. I'll support her as much as I can and it does pain me to be yell and be mad at her but If I don't see a change in her attitude soon and sensitivity to others besides herself I don't know how long I can continue all of this.

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Nicki's POV

*at the store*

I parked my range drover in to the sleek wet parking spot and got out the car. I locked my door as rain drizzled onto the ground I noticed there were only a few cars in the lot, which was very beneficial to me because that way I knew my cover couldn’t be blown. I walked in the store with my hands stuffed in my hoodie pockets and my purse hanging from my shoulder. I looked around to see where to go, and then I saw the sign that read:

"AISLE 4 Family Planning."

So I swiftly walked in the aisle trying to just glance at things so the others in the store wouldn’t really know what I was looking for. All I saw were condoms, lubricants, and home HIV test. I almost gave up on looking when I came to the end of the aisle and finally saw the pregnancy tests. I leaned to pick up a few boxes and I tugged at it.

"Why isn't it coming out." I pulled harder.

"Is it jammed or something?"

I look around the box to see what was causing the jamming and then I realized the test were locked. Great! Just my luck. Now I have to fucking go up there and ask a staff member to open this. Ugh! I walked up the aisle browsing at the other things here and seeing condoms, birth control excreta. And it all that just gave me a flash back that rubbed me the wrong way. I remember having to sneak out to my nearest corner store to get condoms. I never looked the cashiers in the face because I knew they were staring at me wondering why someone my age would need that. It was the most embarrassing thing I had to do. It always felt like the walk of shame, but I knew it was either that or get pregnant. Until one day I came back in the store and it wasn't a condom that I needed this time. Sadly, it was a test. The one thing I was so sure I would never need. I remember the…..

"OUCH!" I practically screamed.

"Oh shit!"

I heard a deep voice say not knowing where it came from exactly. I just freaking walked into this shelf at the end of the aisle. I gotta stop day dreaming. I rubbed my leg as fast as I could to stop the pain when I felt a strong hand on my back. I immediately turned around. And there I saw a tall guy with a beautiful natural tan, almost dark blue eyes and dark brown hair.

"My bad ma'am I didn’t mean to scare you." he spoke in a deep husk voice.

"No, no it's cool. I should be the one saying sorry! I just knocked down your nice display of properly stacked paper towels." I giggled. He flashed a warm smile.

"Yeahhh….about that are you okay?" He asked lightly placing his hand on my shoulder while looking concerned at my leg. I slowly drifted away from his slight grasp because it made me uncomfortable. And I'm not sure if it made me uncomrftable in a good way like I think he's hot, Or in a bad way like this is inappropriate contact.

"I'll be fine." I assured him.

"I just need to pay more attention to where I'm going next time. But thanks for helping me mr...…" I froze trying to find his name tag.

"Oh, The name is tony." He stuck out his hand for me to shake and I accepted. He has nice big soft hands.

"Hi tony I'm nic….I'm...uh.."

"Nic?" he asked questionably.

"Well my real name is Nicole but my friends call me nic for short." Shit! I just barely got out of that one. Two cool point for onika.

"Cool! I've always liked that name and by the way my bad I don't have a name tag. I just finished ten long years of law school and I couldn't find a job so I have to work the night shift here at this dump and they haven't given me a name tag yet."

"Law school? Wow Congratulations ." this guy has the looks and the books.

"Thank you. Well uh, Was there anything here that you wanted to buy that might be heavy? Because I could help you to the car with it but I might need you husbands help…" He looked at me and I just shook my head no.

"Boyfriend?" I shook my head no again and laughed at his horrible attempt to see if I was single or not.

"single? Wow okay. Then what brings a beautiful woman like you into the store at night." I smiled and could feel my dimples making an appearance, but my smile quickly faded when I realized I had to tell him what I was here for.

"Uh.. Actually I'm here for a pregnancy test…." I looked down at my feet because I knew he wasn’t going to be interested in talking to me anymore.

"Oh." he said sounding regretful.

"Well then I got the keys right here lets get this baby open! Uh… I mean you know...Uh"

I giggled again.

"It's cool! I don’t care."

"Okay good cause I am just saying all the wrong things today." He walked before me as we walked back down the aisle. When we reached the location of the test, He bent down on one knee and leaned in a little bit and unlocked the test. He moved out the way so I could gain access. I looked at all of them and there had to be at least ten different brands there so I just picked up one of each brand. I held all the test tight to my chest because there were too many to carry in hand. I didn’t wait for him to lock it back up because this is super embarrassing and I know this must be a turn off for him. So I just went straight to the check out counter. I opened my arms and all the test fell flat on the counter. I heard his feet dragging on the thin carpet of the store as he walked up to the counter. He rung all of them up slowly but surely.

"Alright, that brings your total to one hundred five dollars and sixty one cents."

I reached into my bag and pulled out my card and handed it to him. He slid the card through the machine.

He held out the card and looked at me. Oh shit did he see my name on the card? Oh God, Oh God he's gonna think I'm a crazy run away and I had to change my name or something.

"It says it's declined." Wait…….. what? What the hell did he just say? How can my card be declined? I'm N.i.c.k.i to the motha fuckin' M.i.n.a.j. but I can't tell him that. So I just replied….

"excuse me?" He laughed.

"I'm just kidding." I was pissed but seeing his smile made me lighten up. I didn’t want to laugh so all that showed were my stupid dimples because I was smiling at his stupid joke. Shortly our laughter seized t and soon it became quiet again. He took his arm and cupped it around all the test and just dumped it all in one bag. He reached over the counter and passed me the bag.

"Here you are and thanks for shopping at Walgreens." he said in a country accent.

This dude is freaking stewpidddddddd but he's funny, I like that.

"Thank you for everything tony. See you around." I took the bag from his hand and reached into my bag for my keys and headed to the door.

"WAIT!" he yelled. I turned around and I saw tony jogging over to me.

"Yea? Did I drop something?" I questioned him.

"No, but I forgot to drop you my number." he handed me a card with his name, number and legal services. I just gave him a blank stare.

"Yea I know it’s a business card but hey, it has my number." he gave me a grin.

"You know incase you want to tell me the results of the test or whatever…" Ha! This boy is the last thing but slick when it comes to hitting on girls.

"OMG yes! Cause I can't wait to hit you up about my results." I said sarcastically. He looked confused.

"Why would you want to hit me up. I thought we were cool?" I cackled for the first time all day.

"No Boy! "Hit you up" doesn’t actually mean I'm going to hit you. It means that I'm going to contact you?"

"Oh? So you are going to call me?" He asked with his eyebrow raised.

"We'll see about that! Maybe I will….Maybe I won't but Thanks so much for your help. Sorry about your paper towels." we both laughed. I stuffed the card in my bra put on my glasses and waved good bye as I walked out the electric doors and to my car.

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As I drove home the sun had already come down and it began to rain heavy. I was in no rush to go back home so I just cruised the whole ride with enya's album played low through my speakers. After passing a couple lights I entered my gated neighbor hood. but since I left my security card at home I had to check in with the security guards to let me pass the gate. As I pulled up an older gentleman with caramel skin and gray hair stepped out. I wound my window down.

"Hi Mr. Eddie!" I knew him from leaving my keys at home multiple times before.

"Hello Onika, how are you this evening?"

"I'm good." I lied.

"Actually what had happened was I switched cars so when I did I forgot to take the card with me." I explained.

He shook his head in understanding.

"No problem Ms. Maraj you know we have you covered."

He unlocked the two huge brown gates and let me through.

"THANKS AGAIN MR.EDDIE!" I yelled out the window while driving off. I took a couple turns and finally I was back home. I pulled into the drive way slowly, parked and took out the keys. I didn’t get out just yet though. I sat there in the car letting the rain fall on the roof and windows of my car. The sound of rain at night is so beautiful to me. *sigh* I'm just gonna go in there and take these test, see what they say. If they're negative like everyone's been telling me, fuck it ! I'll drop it like everyone wants me to do. I leaned back and rested my head on the head rest. After sitting and thinking for a while I decided to get out. I grabbed the plastic bag from the passenger seat quickly shut the door and ran into the house trying not to get to wet from the rain.

        As I walked in all the lights were off. I walked to the wall and turned on the lights. As I walked toward the kitchen Safaree was coming up the stairs from the basement. We didn’t speak a word to each other. I didn’t look at him, nor did I want to at this time. I opened the fridge looking for some water . I search on the side door and I reached in to grab to bottles of water. I could hear him approaching me. I shut the door, walked passed him and headed to my room.

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No ones pov

Nicki walked into her master bed room sweet and dropped all her bags on her bed, plus the two water bottles she'd just picked up. She walked into her bath room sluggishly, she was emotionally drained and she was ready to give up on the whole baby idea. She went to her four person glass shower and ran some water so she could hopefully wash off the days stress. She rose her black hoodie above her head and threw it to the ground, along with her pants and undergarments. Leaving her completely naked. She walked back to her bed grabbing both water bottles, opened them and began to drink the content. Soon after finishing her drink she slowly pulled her wig off and walked it over to it's proper manikin. Walking back to the bathroom she combed her hair with her fingers and tied it up into a messy bun. She stood near the sink bent down and retrieved a shower cap from the drawer. As she was about to step in the shower nicki felt the two bottles of water kicking in. So she grabbed one of many disposable plastic cups that she used for mouth wash at times and went to the toilet. Nicki squat down making sure her legs weren't touching the seat and stuck her hand holding the cup under her pee hole and peed straight into the cup. When she was done she wiped herself, flushed the toilet. She walked back to the sink and left the cup on the ledge. She grabbed all the test she'd recently bought and opened each one. She submerged them in the cup. She pulled some paper towel out and laid it on the counter. After a couple of secs She took out all the test laid them one by one on the paper towel.

"Here goes nothing, I'll know the results when I get out the shower." And with that she entered the hot steamy cave.

On the other side of the house Safaree had been thinking. Although he was really pissed off at Nic today he knew she needed him even though she might not admit it. So he decided to be the bigger person and come upstairs to Nicki's room. Sometimes if he was lucky he could call that room his own also. He got up from the couch and folded his blanket and dropped it on the couch. He turned everything up and headed up stairs to Nicki's room. He reached for the door knob but it was locked. So he knocked on the door.

"Hey nic, let me come in." There was no answer because she was in the shower but he took it as if she was ignoring him.

"Look, I'm sorry for being rude today."

"come onnnn nic…." still no answer.

"Alright well I'll just sit out here until you're ready to let me in."

Safaree sat down Indian style outside her door waiting for an answer. Mean while Nicki was just getting out of her shower . She stepped out the shower and wrapped the towel around her body. She took a worried glance at the test. She wasn’t ready to look. So She decided to go to her closet and get dressed first.

"What to wear….What to wear…." She mumbled to herself.

"ooooo I know! These cut out leggings are so freaking cute! Hmmm and I guess I'll just wear this plain Versace T-shirt." She grabbed her clothes put on some lotion and got dressed. When she brushed her hair she was officially ready for bed, But she had one more thing to do….which was look at the pregnancy test. She carefully walked into her bathroom. She crossed her arms and paced back and forth for a while. When she couldn’t stand the anxiety she walked over to the sink, looked down at all the test…. And one by one they all read negative. Nicki dropped her arms and balled up her fist. She began to bite on the side of her cheek in anger but soon after she just couldn’t deal.

"NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" she screamed out in frustration.

"FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK" she yelled again but this time knocking everything on the sink to the ground.

"FUCK ALL OF THIS SHIT! I'M DONE!"

On the other side of the door safaree jumped at the sound of all the commotion. He knocked on the bed room door with force this time.

"NIC!!!!!!!" He pounded. She didn’t reply.

"NICKI OPEN THIS DOOR RIGHT NOW!" she still didn’t answer.

"You know what? Fuck that!" safaree said and with that being said safaree stepped back from the door and immediately charged all his body weight into the door knocking the door down. But none of this startled nicki. Her mind was some where else.

Safaree walked into the bed room and all he saw were her clothes laying on the ground. He followed the path of the clothes and that’s when he saw her throwing things everywhere. All the pregnancy test were scattered on the ground and the cup of pee was splattered every where.

Safaree ran up to her and held her arms trying to calm her down.

"Nic are you okay? What's wrong?" she wasn’t answering him she was just trying to get out his grasp.

"TALK TO ME DAMN IT." He yelled at her and at that moment nicki finally acknowledged his presence and looked at him with the most hate in her eyes.

"GET THE FUCK OFF OF ME YOU SON OF A BITCH!" nicki snatched her arms out of his grasp. She walked fiercely into the bed room and gathered some things on the bed. Safaree was taken aback when she responded like that. So he followed her to the bed room.

"What the hell is going on nicki? What the fuck is your problem?" she continued to put stuff in her purse. But then she answered him.

"You wanna have sex with me here and there and up and down but when I want one thing. Just ONE GHAT DAMN THING from you! To be able to have your child shit goes Wrong. UGHHHHH." She screamed.

She picked up her bag and rand down the stairs safaree ran after her.

"Nicki what are you talking about? You never said you wanted to have kids with me! Hell, you've never even told me you wanted to be with me in a fucking relationship." She ignored him picked up the keys from the kitchen counter and ran out the front door. Safaree quickly opened the door and yelled.

"WHERE ARE YOU EVEN GOING?"

"OUT!" she yelled and drove off into the night .

What did y'all think? Again PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE try to be really descriptive with your comments because I really want to know what you guys think.